idk man, reading the first one gives me anxiety
like, I have pretty severe ADHD but I don't think this is one of those "dulling your sparkle" things — different styles of writing work for different purposes — and I *enjoy* going back and "trimming the fat" from my first draft
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RT @GeraintWorks
How ADHD people write VS how we have to write.
https://twitter.com/GeraintWorks/status/1383745091114717194
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but like seriously, I know this is my problem and all, but reading the first one, even in my head, makes me run out of breath
there's a time and a place to imbue your writing with feeling in order to transfer it to the reader
